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==Welcome== | ==Welcome== | ||
Hello, {{BASEPAGENAME}}, and welcome to '''Pikipedia''', a wiki with information regarding ''Pikmin''. We thank you for registering, and would like to point you to the '''[[Pikipedia:Helping out|Helping out]]''' page so you can get started right away. If you need a guide for beginners on how to edit pages, check the '''[[Help:Quick start guide|Quick start guide]]'''. Finally, if you need to talk to one of us, there's the '''[[ | Hello, {{BASEPAGENAME}}, and welcome to '''Pikipedia''', a wiki with information regarding ''Pikmin''. We thank you for registering, and would like to point you to the '''[[Pikipedia:Helping out|Helping out]]''' page so you can get started right away. If you need a guide for beginners on how to edit pages, check the '''[[Help:Quick start guide|Quick start guide]]'''. Finally, if you need to talk to one of us, there's the '''[[Help:Chat|Chatroom]]'''. We hope you enjoy your stay! — '''{''[[User:Espyo|Espyo]]''<sup>[[User talk:Espyo|T]]</sup>}''' 11:43, 23 March 2016 (EDT) | ||
==Some edit problems== | ==Some edit problems== | ||
Hey there. I had to revert a recent edit you made on the [[Submerged Castle]] article because unfortunately, it didn't improve the quality of the article. Don't worry, you're not in trouble. I'll explain why your edit wasn't good so you can avoid doing it in the future, okay? For one thing, you added a lot of links to other pages. Adding links to pages is fine, but in moderation. You shouldn't make every mention of a different subject a link, otherwise half of the article is covered in links (which brings a lot of small problems). Specially when you link to the same article twice two times close together. If the reader didn't click the link to a different article the first time, they won't click it the second time. Try to focus more on adding good content and don't worry so much about links. Secondly, when you made the links, you made the name of a lot of things lowercase when they used to be uppercase. It's all right if you don't know what should be uppercase and what should be lowercase, but if the original words were in uppercase, you should've paid attention and made it remain uppercase in the link. Finally, you said that Dwarf Orange Bulborbs are also called "Dwarf Bulblaxes". Nobody calls them that, so please refrain from adding content to the article that is not true. Keep these points in mind when you make your next edits, all right? Good luck! — '''{''[[User:Espyo|Espyo]]''<sup>[[User talk:Espyo|T]]</sup>}''' 18:02, 23 March 2016 (EDT) Ok! I`ll put this in a Google doc to remember. -'''{''[[User:Yoshi2016|Yoshi2016]]} | Hey there. I had to revert a recent edit you made on the [[Submerged Castle]] article because unfortunately, it didn't improve the quality of the article. Don't worry, you're not in trouble. I'll explain why your edit wasn't good so you can avoid doing it in the future, okay? For one thing, you added a lot of links to other pages. Adding links to pages is fine, but in moderation. You shouldn't make every mention of a different subject a link, otherwise half of the article is covered in links (which brings a lot of small problems). Specially when you link to the same article twice two times close together. If the reader didn't click the link to a different article the first time, they won't click it the second time. Try to focus more on adding good content and don't worry so much about links. Secondly, when you made the links, you made the name of a lot of things lowercase when they used to be uppercase. It's all right if you don't know what should be uppercase and what should be lowercase, but if the original words were in uppercase, you should've paid attention and made it remain uppercase in the link. Finally, you said that Dwarf Orange Bulborbs are also called "Dwarf Bulblaxes". Nobody calls them that, so please refrain from adding content to the article that is not true. Keep these points in mind when you make your next edits, all right? Good luck! — '''{''[[User:Espyo|Espyo]]''<sup>[[User talk:Espyo|T]]</sup>}''' 18:02, 23 March 2016 (EDT) Ok! I`ll put this in a Google doc to remember. -'''{''[[User:Yoshi2016|Yoshi2016]]} | ||